Thisisanobviouserror。ItisabsolutelynewtoEdwinDroodthattheopiumhagisintimatelyacquaintedwithhisuncle,Jasper,andhatesJasperwithadeadlyhatred。AllthisisnotonlynewtoDrood,ifalive,butisrichinpromiseoffurtherrevelations。Drood,onChristmasEve,hadlearnedfromthehagonlythatshetookopium,andthatshehadcomefromtowntoCloisterham,andhad"huntedforaneedleinabottleofhay。"Thatwasthesumofhisinformation。Nowhelearnsthatthewomanknows,tracks,hasfound,andhates,hisworthyuncle,Jasper。Hemaywell,therefore,addaheavymarktohisscore。
Wemustalsoask,HowcouldHelena,freshfromCeylon,know"theoldtavernwayofkeepingscores?Illegibleexcepttothescorer。Thescorernotcommitted,thescoreddebitedwithwhatisagainsthim,"asDatcheryobserves。AnEurasiangirloftwenty,newtoEngland,wouldnotarguethuswithherself:shewouldprobablyknownothingofEnglishtavernscores。WedonothearthatHelenaeveropenedabook:
wedoknowthateducationhadbeendeniedtoher。WhatacquaintancecouldshehavewitholdEnglishtaverncustoms?
IfDroodisDatchery,thenDickensusedaformofaveryoldandfavouriteFICELLEofhis:thewatchingofavillainbyanimprobableandunsuspectedperson,inthiscasethoughttobedead。IfHelenaisDatchery,the"assumption"orpersonationisinthehighestdegreeimprobable,herwholebearingisquiteoutofherpossibilities,andthepersonationisveryabsurd。
Herethestoryends。
THEORIESOFTHEMYSTERY
FORSTER’SEVIDENCE
WEhavesomeexternalevidenceastoDickens’ssolutionofhisownproblem,fromForster。(2)OnAugust6,1869,someweeksbeforehebegantoworkathistale,Dickens,inaletter,toldForster,"Ihaveaverycuriousandnewideaformynewstory。Notcommunicable(ortheinterestofthebookwouldbegone),butaverystrongone,thoughdifficulttowork。"ForstermusthaveinstantlyaskedthattheincommunicablesecretshouldbecommunicatedtoHIM,forhetellsusthat"IMMEDIATELYAFTERIlearnt"-thesecret。Butdidhelearnit?
Dickenswasill,andhisplot,whateveritmayhavebeen,wouldbeirritatinglycriticizedbyForsterbeforeitwasfullythoughtout。
"Fulesandbairnsshouldnotseehalf-donework,"andDickensmaywellhavefeltthatForstershouldnotseeworknotevenbegun,butmerelysimmeringintheauthor’sownfancy。
ForsterdoesnottellusthatDickenscommunicatedthesecretinaletter。Hequotesnone:hesays"Iwastold,"orally,thatis。Whenhewrites,fiveyearslater(1874),"Landlesswas,ITHINK,tohaveperishedinassistingTartarfinallytounmaskandseizethemurderer,"heisclearlytrusting,nottoaletterofDickens’s,buttoadefectivememory;andheknowsit。Hesaysthatanephewwastobemurderedbyanuncle。Thecriminalwastoconfessinthecondemnedcell。Hewastofindoutthathiscrimehadbeenneedless,andtobeconvictedbymeansofthering(Rosa’smother’sring)remaininginthequicklimethathaddestroyedthebodyofEdwin。
Nothing"new"inallthis,asForstermusthaveseen。"Theoriginality,"heexplains,"wastoconsistinthereviewofthemurderer’scareerbyhimselfattheclose,whenitstemptationsweretobedweltuponasif,nothetheculprit,butsomeotherman,werethetempted。"
Butallthisisnot"hardtowork,"andisnot"original。"AsMr。
Proctorremarks,Dickenshadusedthattricktwicealready。
("Madman’sManuscript,"PICKWICK;"ClockCaseConfession,"inMASTER
HUMPHREY’SCLOCK。)Thequicklimetrickisalsoveryoldindeed。Thedisguiseofawomanasamanisasancientastheartoffiction:yetHelenaMAYbeDatchery,thoughnobodyguesseditbeforeMr。CumingWalters。SheoughtnottobeDatchery;sheisquiteoutofkeepinginherspeechandmannerasDatchery,andismuchmorelikeDrood。
"ANEWIDEA"
Therearenonewideasinplots。"Allthestorieshavebeentold,"
andallthemeritliesinthemannerofthetelling。Dickenshadusedtheunsuspectedwatcher,asMr。Proctorshows,inalmostallhisnovels。InMARTINCHUZZLEWIT,whenJonasfindsthatNadgetthasbeenthewatcher,Dickenswrites,"Thedeadmanmighthavecomeoutofhisgraveandnotconfoundedandappalledhimso。"Now,toJasper,EdwinWAS"thedeadman,"andEdwin’sgravecontainedquicklime。JasperwassurethathehaddoneforEdwin:hehadtakenEdwin’swatch,chain,andscarf-pin;hebelievedthathehadlefthim,drugged,inquicklime,inalockedvault。ConsequentlythereappearanceofEdwin,quitewell,inthevaultwhereJasperhadburiedhim,wouldbeaverynewideatoJasper;would"confoundandappallhim。"Jasperwouldhaveemotions,atthatspectacle,andsowouldthereader!Itisnoteveryday,eveninourageofsixpennynovels,thatamurdereriscompelledtovisit,alone,atnight,thevaultwhichholdshisvictim’s"coldremains,"andthereinfindsthevictim"comeup,smiling。"
Yes,forbusinesspurposes,thisideawasnewenough!Theideawas"difficulttowork,"saysDickens,withobvioustruth。Howwashetogetthequicklimeintothevault,andDrood,alive,outofthevault?
Astothereader,hewouldatfirsttakeDatcheryforDrood,andthenthink,"No,thatisimpossible,andalsoisstale。DatcherycannotbeDrood,"andthusthereaderwouldremaininapleasantstateofpuzzledom,ashedoes,untothisday。
IfEdwinisdead,thereisnotmuch"Mystery"abouthim。WehaveasgoodasseenJasperstranglehimandtakehispin,chain,andwatch。
YetbyadroitlymanagingtheconductofMr。Grewgious,DickenspersuadedMr。Proctorthatcertainly,GrewgiousknewEdwintobealive。AsGrewgiousknew,fromHelena,allthatwasnecessarytoprovokehisexperimentonJasper’snerves,Mr。Proctorarguedonfalsepremises,butthatwasduetothecraftofDickens。Mr。ProctorrejectedForster’sreport,frommemory,ofwhatheunderstoodtobethe"incommunicablesecret"ofDickens’splot,andIthinkthathewasjustifiedintherejection。Forsterdoesnotseemtohavecaredaboutthething-hereferslightlyto"thereadercuriousinsuchmatters"-
whenoncehehadreceivedhisexplanationfromDickens。Hismemory,inthespaceoffiveyears,mayhavebeeninaccurate:heprobablyneitherknewnorcaredwhoDatcherywas;andhemayreadilyhavemisunderstoodwhatDickenstoldhim,orally,aboutthering,astheinstrumentofdetection。Moreover,Forsterquiteoverlookedonesourceofevidence,asIshallshowlater。
MR。PROCTOR’STHEORY
Mr。Proctor’stheoryofthestoryisthatJasper,afterEdwin’sreturnatmidnightonChristmasEve,recommendedawarmdrink-mulledwine,drugged-andthenproposedanotherstrollofinspectionoftheeffectsofthestorm。Hethenstrangledhim,somewhere,andplacedhiminthequicklimeintheSapseavault,lockedhimin,andwenttobed。Next,accordingtoMr。Proctor,Durdles,then,"lyingdrunkintheprecincts,"forsomereasontapswithhishammeronthewalloftheSapseavault,detectsthepresenceofaforeignbody,opensthetomb,andfindsDroodinthequicklime,"hisfacefortunatelyprotectedbythestrongsilkshawlwithwhichJasperhasintendedtothrottlehim。"
AMISTAKENTHEORY
Thisis"thin,"very"thin!"DickensmusthavehadsomebetterschemethanMr。Proctor’s。WhydidJaspernot"maksikker"likeKirkpatrickwiththeRedComyn?Whydidheleavehissilkscarf?Itmightcometobeaskedfor;tobesurethequicklimewoulddestroyit,butwhydidJasperleaveit?WhydidtheintoxicatedDurdlescomeoutofthecrypt,ifhewasthere,enterthegraveyard,andbegintappingatthewallofthevault?Whynotopenthedoor?hehadthekey。
Suppose,however,allthistohaveoccurred,andsuppose,withMr。
Proctor,thatDurdlesandDeputycarriedEdwintotheTramps’
lodgings,wouldDurdlesfailtorecognizeEdwin?WearetoguessthatGrewgiouswaspresent,ordisturbedathisinn,orsomehowbroughtintotouchwithEdwin,andbribedDurdlestosilence,"untilaschemeforthepunishmentofJasperhadbeendevised。"
Allthissetofconjecturesiscrudetothelastdegree。WedonotknowhowDickensmeanttogetEdwinintoandoutofthevault。
GrantingthatEdwinwasdrugged,JaspermightleadEdwinin,consideringthelicenceextendedtotheeffectsofdrugsinnovels,andmightstranglehimthere。Aboveall,howdidGrewgious,ifinCloisterham,cometobeathandatmidnight?
ANOTHERWAY
IfImustmakeaguess,IconjecturethatJasperhadoneofhis"filmy"seizures,was"inafrightfulsortofdream,"andbungledthemurder:madeanincompletejobofit。Half-strangledmenandwomenhaveoftenrecovered。InJasper’sopiumvisionandreminiscencetherewasnoresistance,allwasverysoonover。Jaspermightevenbunglethelockingofthedoorofthevault。Hewasapttohaveaseizureafteropium,inmomentsofexcitement,andHEHADBEENATTHEOPIUM
DENTHROUGHTHENIGHTOFDECEMBER23,forthehagtrackedhimfromherhouseintowntoCloisterhamonDecember24,thedayofthecrime。
Grantthathisaccustomedfitcameuponhimduringtheexcitementofthemurder,asitdoescomeafter"anichtwi’opium,"inchapterii。,whenEdwinexciteshimbycontemptuoustalkofthegirlwhomJasperlovessofuriously-andthenanythingmayhappen!
JaspermurdersEdwininefficiently;hehasafit;whileheisunconsciousthequicklimerevivesEdwin,byburninghishand,say,and,duringJasper’sswoon,Edwin,likeanotherfamousprisoner,"hasahappythought,heopensthedoor,andwalksout。"
Beingdrugged,heisinadreamystate;knowsnotclearlywhathasoccurred,orwhoattackedhim。Jasperrevives,"lookon’tagainhedarenot,"-onthebodyofhisvictim-andHEwalksoutandgoeshome,wherehisredlamphasburnedallthetime-"thinkingitallwerycapital。"
"Anotherway,"-JaspernotonlyfailstostrangleDrood,butfailstolockthedoorofthevault,andDroodwalksoutafterJasperhasgone。
Jasperhas,beforehisfit,"removedfromthebodythemostlasting,thebestknown,andmosteasilyrecognizablethingsuponit,thewatchandscarf-pin。"SoDickensputsthepopularviewofthecaseagainstNevilleLandless,andsowearetopresumethatJasperacted。Ifheremovednomorethingsfromthebodythanthese,hemadeafataloversight。
Meanwhile,howdoesEdwin,onceoutofthevault,makegoodasecretescapefromCloisterham?Mr。ProctorinvokestheaidofMr。
Grewgious,butdoesnotexplainwhyGrewgiouswasonthespot。I
venturetothinkitnotinconceivablethatMr。GrewgioushavingcomedowntoCloisterhambyalatetrain,onChristmasEve,tokeephisChristmasappointmentwithRosa,paidadarklingvisittothetombofhislostlove,Rosa’smother。Grewgiouswasverysentimental,buttoosecretivetopaysuchavisitbydaylight。"Anightofmemoriesandsighs"hemight"consecrate"tohislostladylove,asLandordidtoRoseAylmer。GrewgiouswastohavehelpedBazzardtoeataturkeyonChristmasDay。Buthecouldgetoutofthatengagement。HewouldwishtoseeEdwinandRosatogether,andEdwinwasleavingCloisterham。ThedateofGrewgious’sarrivalatCloisterhamisstudiouslyconcealed。IofferatleastaconceivablemotiveforGrewgious’spossiblepresenceatthechurchyard。Mrs。Bud,hislostlove,wehavebeentold,wasburiedhardbytheSapseamonument。IfGrewgiousvisitedhertomb,hewasonthespottohelpEdwin,supposingEdwintoescape。Unlikelierthingsoccurinnovels。Idonot,infact,calltheseprobableoccurrencesinevery-daylife,butnoneofthestoryisprobable。Jasper’s"weirdseizures"aremeanttoleaduptoSOMETHING。TheymayhavebeenmeanttoleaduptothefailureofthemurderandtheescapeofEdwin。OfcourseDickenswouldnothavetreatedtheseincidents,whenhecametomakeEdwinexplain,-nobodyelsecouldexplain,-inmystudiouslysimplestyle。
ThedruggedEdwinhimselfwouldrememberthecircumstancesbutmistily:hisevidencewouldbeofnovalueagainstJasper。
Mr。Proctornextsupposes,wesaw,thatDroodgotintotouchwithGrewgious,andIhaveaddedthecircumstanceswhichmighttakeGrewgioustothechurchyard。Next,whenEdwinrecoveredhealth,hecamedown,perhaps,asDatchery,tospyonJasper。Ihaveelsewheresaid,asMr。CumingWaltersquotesme,that"fancycansuggestnoreasonwhyEdwinDrood,ifheescapedfromhiswickeduncle,shouldgospyingaboutinsteadofcomingopenlyforward。Noplausibleunfantasticreasoncouldbeinvented。"Later,IshallexplainwhyEdwin,ifheisDatchery,mightgospyingalone。
ItisalsourgedthatEdwinleftRosainsorrow,andleftblameonNevilleLandless。Whydothis?Mr。ProctorrepliesthatGrewgious’sintenseandwatchfulinterestinNeville,otherwiseunexplained,isduetohisknowledgethatDroodisalive,andthatNevillemustbecaredfor,whileGrewgioushastoldRosathatEdwinlives。HealsotoldherofEdwin’srealloveofher,henceMissBudsays,"Poor,poorEddy,"quiteAPROPOSDEBOTTES,whenshefindsherselfmanyfathomsdeepinlovewithLieutenantTartar,R。N。"’Poor,poorEddy!’thoughtRosa,astheywalkedalong,"Tartarandshe。ThisisaplausiblesuggestionofMr。Proctor。Edwin,thoughknowntoRosatobealive,hasnochance!But,astomyownremark,"whyshouldnotEdwincomeforwardatonce,insteadofspyingabout?"Well,ifhedid,therewouldbenostory。Asfor"anunfantasticreason"forhisconduct,Dickensisnotwritingan"unfantastic"novel。Moreover,ifthingsoccurredasIhavesuggested,IdonotseewhatevidenceDroodhadagainstJasper。Edwin’sclotheswerecoveredwithlime,but,whenhetoldhisstory,JasperwouldreplythatDroodneverreturnedtohishouseonChristmasEve,butstayedout,"doingwhatwascorrectbytheseason,inthewayofgivingitthewelcomeithadtherighttoexpect,"likeDurdlesonanotheroccasion。Drood’sevidence,ifitwaswhatIhavesuggested,wouldsoundlikethedreamofanintoxicatedman,andwhatotherevidencecouldbeadduced?ThusIhadworkedoutDrood’scondition,ifhereallywasnotkilled,inthisway:Ihadsupposedhimtoescape,inaverymixedframeofmind,whenhewouldbeencounteredbyGrewgious,who,ofcourse,couldmakelittleoutofhiminhisbefoggedstate。DroodcouldnotevenprovethatitwasnotLandlesswhoattackedhim。TheresultwouldbethatDroodwouldlielow,andlater,wouldhavereasonenoughfordisguisinghimselfasDatchery,andplayingthespyinCloisterham。
AtthispointIwasreinforcedbyanopinionwhichMr。WilliamArcherhadexpressed,unknowntome,inanewspaperarticle。IhaddescribedEdwin’sconfusedknowledgeofhisownexperience,ifhewerethoroughlydrugged,andthenhalfstrangled。Mr。Archeralsotookthatpoint,andaddedthatEdwinbeingagood-heartedfellow,andfondofhisuncleJasper,hewouldnotbring,orletGrewgiousbring,aterriblechargeagainstJasper,tillheknewmorecertainlythewholestateofthecase。Forthatreason,hewouldcomedisguisedtoCloisterhamandmakeinquiries。BylettingJasperknowaboutthering,hewouldcompelhimtoenterthevault,andthen,Mr。Archerthinks,wouldinducehimto"repentandbeginlifeafresh。"
IscarcelythinkthatDatchery’spurposewassotrulyhonourable:heratherseemstobegettingupacaseagainstJasper。Still,theideaofMr。Archerisveryplausible,and,atleast,givenDrood’sneedofevidence,andthelackofevidenceagainstJasper,weseereasongood,inanovelofthiskind,forhisplayingthepartofamateurdetective。
DICKENS’SUNUSEDDRAFTOFACHAPTER
Forsterfound,andpublished,averyillegiblesketchofachapterofthetale:"HowMr。SapseaceasedtobeaMemberoftheEightClub,ToldbyHimself。"Thiswas"acramped,interlined,andblotted"
draft,onpaperofonlyhalfthesizecommonlyusedbyDickens。Mr。
SapseatellshowhisClubmockedhimaboutastranger,whohadmistakenhimfortheDean。Thejackass,Sapsea,lefttheClub,andmetthestranger,AYOUNGMAN,whofooledhimtothetopofhisbent,saying,"IfIwastodenythatIcametothistowntoseeandhearyou,Sir,whatwoulditavailme?"Apparentlythispaperwasaroughdraftofanideaforintroducingadetective,asaYOUNGman,whomocksSapseajustasDatcherydoesinthenovel。ButtomakethespyAYOUNGman,whetherthespywasDroodorHelenaLandless,wastoodifficult;andthereforeDickensmakesDatchery"anelderlybuffer"inawhitewig。IfIamright,itwaseasierforHelena,agirl,toposeasayoungman,thanforDroodtoreappearasayoungman,nothimself。HelenaMAYbeDatchery,andyetDroodmaybealiveandbidinghistime;butIhavedisprovedmyoldobjectionthattherewasnoreasonwhyDrood,ifalive,shouldgospyingaboutindisguise。
ThereweregoodDickensianreasons。
AQUESTIONOFTASTE
Mr。CumingWaltersarguesthatthestoryisverytameifEdwinisstillalive,andleftoutofthemarriagesattheclose。Besides,"Droodislittlemorethananame-label,attachedtoabody,amanwhoneverexcitessympathy,whosefatecausesnoemotion,heissavedfornousefulorsentimentalpurpose,andlagssuperfluousonthestage。
Allofwhichisbadart,sobadthatDickenswouldneverhavebeenguiltyofit。"
Thatisaquestionoftaste。Onrereadingthenovel,IseethatDickensmakesDroodassympatheticashecan。Heisveryyoung,andspeaksofRosawithbadtaste,butheisreallyinlovewithher,muchmoresothanshewithhim,andheispiquedbyherceaselessmockery,andbytheirfalseposition。ToJasperheissingularlytender,andremorsefulwhenhethinksthathehasshownwantoftact。Thereisnothingominousabouthisgaiety:astohisonefault,weleavehim,onChristmasEve,aconvertedcharacter:hehasakindwordandlookforeveryonewhomhemeets,youngandold。HeacceptsMr。
Grewgious’sverysternlectureinthebestmannerpossible。Inshort,heismarkedasfaulty-"Iamyoung,"soheexcuseshimself,intheverywordsofDarnleytoQueenMary!(iftheGlasgowletterbegenuine);butheisalsomarkedassympathetic。
Hewas,Ithink,tohavealesson,andtobecomeagoodfellow。Mr。
Proctorrightlyargues(andForster"thinks"),thatDickensmeanttokillNevilleLandless:Mr。CumingWaltersagreeswithhim,butMr。
ProctortrulyaddsthatEdwinhasnoneofthesignsofDickens’sdoomedmen,hisSidneyCartons,andtherest。Youcantell,asitwerebythesoundofthevoiceofDickens,saysMr。Proctor,thatEdwinistolive。Theimpressionismerelysubjective,butIfeeltheimpression。ThedoomofLandlessisconspicuouslyfixed,andwhyisLandlesstobekilledbyJasper?MerelytohaveacountonwhichtohangJasper!HecannotbehangedforkillingDrood,ifDroodisalive。
MR。PROCTOR’STHEORYCONTINUED
Mr。ProctornextsupposesthatDatcheryandothers,byaidoftheopiumhag,havefoundoutagreatdealofevidenceagainstJasper。
Theyhavediscoveredfromtheoldwomanthathiscrimewaslongpremeditated:hehadthreatened"Ned"inhisopiateddreams:andhadclearlyremovedEdwin’strinketsandwatch,becausetheywouldnotbedestroyed,withhisbody,bythequicklime。Thisisallverywell,butthereisstill,sofar,nolegalevidence,onmytheory,thatJasperattemptedtotakeEdwin’slife。Jasper’senemies,therefore,canonlydotheirbesttomakehislifeaburdentohim,andtogivehimagoodfright,probablywiththehopeofterrifyinghimintoavowals。
Nowthefamousringbegins"todragandhold"themurderer。Heisgiventoknow,Ipresume,that,whenEdwindisappeared,hehadagoldringinthepocketofhiscoat。Jasperisthuscompelledtorevisitthevault,atnight,andthere,inthelightofhislantern,heseesthelong-lostEdwin,withhishandinthebreastofhisgreatcoat。
Horrifiedbythisunexpectedappearance,Jasperturnstofly。ButheisconfrontedbyNevilleLandless,Crisparkle,Tartar,andperhapsbyMr。Grewgious,whoareallonthewatch。Herushesupthroughtheonlyoutlet,thewindingstaircaseoftheCathedraltower,ofwhichweknowthathehashadthekey。Neville,wholeadshispursuers,"receiveshisdeathwound"(and,Ithink,ispitchedoffthetopoftheroof)。ThenJasperiscollaredbythatagileclimber,Tartar,andbyCrisparkle,alwaysinthepinkofcondition。ThereisnowsomethingtohangJasperfor-theslayingofLandless(though,asfarasIcansee,THATwasdoneinself-defence)。Jasperconfessesall;
TartarmarriesRosa;HelenamarriesCrisparkle。Edwinisonlytwenty-
one,andmayeasilyfindaconsolerofthefairsex:indeedheis"oweryoungtomarryyet。"
ThecaptureofJasperwasfixed,ofcourse,forChristmasEve。ThephantomcryforeheardbyDurdles,twoyearsbefore,wasthatofNevilleashefell;andthedogthathowledwasNeville’sdog,acharacternotyetintroducedintotheromance。
MR。CUMINGWALTERS’STHEORY
SuchisMr。Proctor’stheoryofthestory,inwhichImainlyagree。
Mr。ProctorreliesonapieceofevidenceoverlookedbyForster,andcertainlymisinterpreted,asIthinkIcanprovetoacertainty,byMr。CumingWalters,whosetheoryoftherealconductoftheplotrunsthus:AfterwatchingthestormatmidnightwithEdwin,Nevillelefthim,andwenthome:"hiswaylayinanoppositedirection。NeartotheCathedralJasperinterceptedhisnephew……Edwinmayhavebeenalreadydrugged。"HowthemurderwasworkedMr。CumingWaltersdoesnotsay,butheintroducesatthispoint,thetwosoundsforeheardbyDurdles,withoutexplaining"thehowlofadog。"Durdleswouldhearthecries,andDeputy"hadseenwhathecouldnotunderstand,"
whateveritwasthathesaw。Jasper,notawareofDrood’spossessionofthering,takesonlyhiswatch,chain,andpin,whichheplacesonthetimbersoftheweir,andintheriver,tobepickedupbythatpersistentwinter-bather,Crisparkleofthetelescopicandmicroscopiceyesight。
Astothering,Mr。CumingWalterserroneouslydeclaresthatMr。
Proctor"ignores"thepowerofthering"toholdanddrag,"andsaysthatpotentpassageis"withoutmeaningandmustbedisregarded。"
Proctor,infact,givesmorethanthreepagestothemeaningofthering,which"drags"Jasperintothevault,whenhehearsofitsexistence。(3)Next,Mr。CumingWalterssupposesDatcherytolearnfromDurdles,whomheistovisit,aboutthesecondhearingofthecryandthedog’showl。DeputymayhaveseenJasper"carryinghisburden"
(Edwin)"towardstheSapseavault。"Infact,JasperprobablysavedtroublebymakingthedruggedEdwinwalkintothatreceptacle。
"DatcherywouldnotthinkoftheSapseavaultunaided。"No-unlessDatcherywasDrood!"NowDurdlesisusefulagain。Tappingwithhishammerhewouldfindachange……inquirymustbemade。"WhyshouldDurdlestaptheSapseamonument?AsDurdleshadthekey,hewouldsimplywalkintothevault,andfindthequicklime。Now,Jasperalso,wepresume,hadakey,madefromawaximpressionoftheoriginal。Ifhehadanysense,hewouldhaveremovedthequicklimeaseasilyasheinsertedit,forMr。Sapseawasmortal:hemightdieanyday,andbeburied,andthenthequicklime,lyingwhereitoughtnot,wouldgiverisetoawkwardinquiries。
Inquirybeingmade,inconsequenceofDurdles’stappings,theringwouldbefound,asMr。CumingWalterssays。Buteventhen,unlessDeputyactuallysawJaspercarryamanintothevault,nobodycouldproveJasper’sconnectionwiththepresenceoftheringinthevault。
Moreover,DeputyhatedJasper,andifhesawJaspercarryingthebodyofaman,onthenightwhenamandisappeared,hewascleverenoughtoleadDurdlestoexaminethevault,ATONCE。DeputyhadagreatdislikeoftheLawanditsofficers,butherewasachanceforhimtodistinguishhimself,andconciliatethem。
Howeverthesethingsmaybe,Mr。CumingWalterssupposesthatJasper,findinghimselfwatched,re-entersthevault,perhaps,"toseethateverytraceofthecrimehadbeenremoved。"Inthevaulthefinds-
Datchery,thatis,HelenaLandless!Jaspercertainlyvisitedthevaultandfoundsomebody。
EVIDENCEOFCOLLINS’SDRAWINGS
WenowcometotheevidencewhichForsterstrangelyoverlooked,whichMr。ProctorandMr。Archercorrectlydeciphered,andwhichMr。CumingWaltersmisinterprets。OnDecember22,1869,DickenswrotetoForsterthattwonumbersofhisromancewere"nowintype。CharlesCollinshasdesignedanexcellentcover。"Mr。C。A。CollinshadmarriedadaughterofDickens。(4)Hewasanartist,agreatfriendofDickens,andauthorofthatcharmingbook,"ACruiseonWheels。"Hisdesignofthepapercoverofthestory(itappearedinmonthlynumbers)
contained,asusual,sketcheswhichgiveaninklingoftheeventsinthetale。Mr。Collinswastohaveillustratedthebook;but,finally,Mr。(nowSir)LukeFildesundertookthetask。Mr。Collinsdiedin1873。ItappearsthatForsterneveraskedhimthemeaningofhisdesigns-asingularoversight。
Thecoverliesbeforethereader。Intheleft-handtopcornerappearsanallegoricalfemalefigureofjoy,withflowers。ThecentraltopspacecontainsthefrontofCloisterhamCathedral,orrather,thenave。TotheleftwalksEdwin,withhyacinthinelocks,andathoroughlyclassicaltypeofface,andGreciannose。LIKEDATCHERY,HEDOESNOTWEAR,BUTCARRIESHISHAT;thismeansnothing,iftheyareinthenave。Heseemsbored。OnhisarmisRosa;SHEseemsbored;
shetrailsherparasol,andlooksawayfromEdwin,looksdown,toherright。Onthespectator’srightmarchthesurplicedmenandboysoftheChoir。BehindthemisJasper,blackwhiskersandall;hestaresafterEdwinandRosa;hisrighthandhideshismouth。Inthecornerabovehimisanallegoricalfemale,claspingastiletto。
BeneathEdwinandRosais,first,anallegoricalfemalefigure,lookingataplacard,headed"LOST,"onadoor。Underthat,again,isagirlinagarden-chair;ayoungman,whiskerless,withwavyhair,kneelsandkissesherhand。Shelooksratherunimpassioned。I
conceivethemantobeLandless,takingleaveofRosaafterurginghishopelesssuit,forwhichHelena,welearn,"seemstocompassionatehim。"Hehasavowedhispassion,earlyinthestory,toCrisparkle。
Below,theopiumhagissmoking。Ontheotherside,underthefiguresofJasperandtheChoir,theyoungmanwhokneelstothegirlisseenboundingupaspiralstaircase。Hislefthandisontheironrailing;
hestoopsoverit,lookingdownatotherswhofollowhim。Hisrighthand,theindexfingerprotruded,pointsupward,and,bychanceordesign,pointsstraightatJasperinthevignetteabove。Beneaththisman(clearlyLandless)followsatallmanina"bowler"hat,a"cut-
away"coat,andtrouserswhichshowaninchofwhitestockingabovethelowshoes。Hisprofileishidbythewallofthespiralstaircase:hemightbeGrewgiousoftheshoes,whitestockings,andshorttrousers,buthemaybeTartar:hetakestwostepsatastride。
Beneathhimayoungishman,inalow,soft,clericalhatandablackpea-coat,ascends,lookingdownwardsandbackwards。ThisisclearlyCrisparkle。AChinamanissmokingopiumbeneath。
Inthecentrallowestspace,adarkandwhiskeredmanentersadarkchamber;hislefthandisonthelockofthedoor;inhisrightheholdsupalantern。ThelightofthelanternrevealsayoungmaninasofthatofTyroleseshape。Hisfeaturesarepurelyclassical,hisnoseisGrecian,hislocksarelong(atleast,accordingtothetasteofto-day);hewearsalightpaletot,buttonedtothethroat;hisrightarmhangsbyhisside;hislefthandisthrustintothebreastofhiscoat。Hecalmlyregardsthedarkmanwiththelantern。Thatman,ofcourse,isJasper。TheyoungmanisEDWINDROOD,oftheGreciannose,hyacinthinelocks,andclassicfeatures,asinSirL。
Fildes’sthirdillustration。
Mr。Proctorcorrectlyunderstoodtheunmistakablemeaningofthislastdesign,Jasperenteringthevault-
"TO-DAYTHEDEADARELIVING,THELOSTISFOUNDTO-DAY。"
Mr。CumingWalterstellsusthathedidnotexaminethesedesignsbyMr。Collinstillhehadformedhistheory,andfinishedhisbook。"Ontheconclusionofthewholeworkthepictureswerereferredtoforthefirsttime,andwerethenfoundtosupportinthemoststrikingmannertheopinionsarrivedat,"namely,thatDroodwaskilled,andthatHelenaisDatchery。Thusdoestheoryblindustofacts!
Mr。CumingWaltersconnectsthefigureofthewhiskerlessyoungmankneelingtoagirlinagardenseat,withthewhiskeredJasper’sproposaltoRosainagardenseat。ButJasperdoesnotkneeltoRosa;
hestandsapart,leaningonasundial;heonlyoncevaguely"touches"
her,whichsheresents;hedoesnotkneel;hedoesnotkissherhand(Rosa"tookthekisssedately,"likeMaudinthepoem);and-Jasperhadlustrousthickblackwhiskers。
Again,thesamewhiskerlessyoungman,boundingupthespiralstaircaseindaylight,andwildlypointingupwards,istakenbyMr。
CumingWalterstorepresentJasperclimbingthestaircasetoreconnoitre,atnight,withalantern,and,ofcourse,withblackwhiskers。Thetwowell-dressedmenonthestairs(Grewgious,orTartar,andCrisparkle)also,accordingtoMr。CumingWalters,"relatetoJasper’sunaccountableexpeditionwithDurdlestotheCathedral。"
NeitherofthemisJasper;neitherofthemisDurdles,"inasuitofcoarseflannel"-adisreputablejacket,asSirL。Fildesdepictshim-"withhornbuttons,"andabatteredoldtallhat。Theseinterpretationsarequitedemonstrablyerroneousandevenimpossible。
Mr。ArcherinterpretsthedesignsexactlyasIdo。
AstotheyoungmaninthelightofJasper’slamp,Mr。CumingWalterssays,"thelargehatandthetightly-buttonedsurtoutmustbeobserved;theyarethearticlesofclothingonwhichmoststressislaidinthedescriptionofDatchery。Butthefaceisyoung。"ThefaceofDatcherywaselderly,andhehadahugeshockofwhitehair,awig。Datcherywore"atightishbluesurtout,withabuffwaist-coatandgreytrousers;hehadsomethingofamilitaryair。"Theyoungmaninthevaulthasanythingbutamilitaryair;heshowsnowaistcoat,andhedoesnotwear"atightishbluesurtout,"oranysurtoutatall。
Thesurtoutoftheperiodisshown,wornbyJasper,inSirL。Fildes’ssixthandninthillustrations。Itisafrock-coat;thecollardescendsfarbelowthetopofthewaistcoat(bufforotherwise),displayingthatgarment;thecoatistightlybuttonedbeneath,revealingthefigure;thetailsofthecoatdonotreachthekneesofthewearer。Theyoungmaninthevault,ontheotherhand,wearsaloosepaletot,buttonedtothethroat(vaultsarechillyplaces),andthecoatfallssoastocovertheknees;atleast,partially。Theyoungmanisnot,likeHelena,"verydark,andfierceoflook,……
ofalmostthegipsytype。"Heisblonde,sedate,andoftheclassictype,asDroodwas。HeisnomorelikeHelenathanCrisparkleislikeDurdles。Mr。CumingWalterssaysthatMr。Proctorwas"unabletoalludetothepropheticpicturebyCollins。"Asafact,thispictureisfullydescribedbyMr。Proctor,butMr。Waltersusedthewrongeditionofhisbook,unwittingly。
Mr。Proctorwrites:-"Creepingdownthecryptsteps,oppressedbygrowinghorrorandbyterrorofcomingjudgment,sickeningunderfearsengenderedbythedarknessofnightandthecharnel-houseairhebreathed,Jasperopensthedoorofthetombandholdsuphislantern,shudderingatthethoughtofwhatitmayrevealtohim。
"Andwhatseeshe?Isitthespiritofhisvictimthatstandsthere,’inhishabitashelived,’hishandclaspedonhisbreast,wheretheringhadbeenwhenhewasmurdered?WhatelsecanJasperdeemit?
There,clearlyvisibleinthegloomatthebackofthetomb,standsEdwinDrood,withsternlookfixedonhim-pale,silent,relentless!"
Again,"Onthetitle-pagearegiventwoofthesmallpicturesfromtheLovesideofthecover,twofromtheMurderside,andthecentralpicturebelow,whichpresentsthecentralhorrorofthestory-theendandaimofthe’Datcheryassumption’andofMr。Grewgious’splans-showingJasperdriventoseekfortheproofsofhiscrimeamidthedusttowhich,ashethought,thefleshandbones,andtheveryclothesofhisvictim,hadbeenreduced。"
Thereareonlytwopossiblechoices;eitherCollins,underDickens’soralinstructions,depictedJasperfindingDroodaliveinthevault,anincidentwhichwastooccurinthestory;orDickensbadeCollinsdothisforthepurposeofmisleadinghisreadersinanillegitimatemanner;whiletheyoungmaninthevaultwasreallytobesomeperson"madeup"tolooklikeDrood,andsotofrightenJasperwithapseudo-
ghostofthathero。Thelatterdevice,themisleadingpicture,wouldbechildish,andthepseudo-ghost,exactlylikeDrood,couldnotbeactedbythegipsy-like,fierceHelena,orbyanyotherpersonintheromance。
MR。WALTERS’STHEORYCONTINUED
Mr。CumingWaltersguessesthatJasperwastoaimadeadlyblow(withhislefthand,tojudgefromthepicture)atHelena,andthatNeville"wastogivehislifeforhers。"But,manifestly,NevillewastoleadthehuntofJasperupthespiralstair,asinCollins’sdesign,andwastobedashedfromtheroof:hisbodybeneathwastobe"THAT,I
neversawbefore。THATmustbereal。Lookwhatapoormeanmiserablethingitis!"asJaspersaysinhisvision。
Mr。CumingWalters,pursuinghisideaofHelenaasbothDatcheryandalsoastheownerof"theYOUNGface"oftheyouthinthevault(andalsooftheyounghands,ayounggirl’shandscouldneverpassforthoseof"anelderlybuffer"),exclaims:"Imaginetheintensepowerofthedramaticclimax,whenDatchery,theelderlyman,isre-
transformedintoHelenaLandless,theyoungandhandsomewoman;andwhensherevealstheseeminglyimpenetrablesecretwhichhadbeenclosedupinoneguiltyman’smind。"
Thesituationsarestartling,Iadmit,buthowwouldCanonCrisparklelikethem?Heis,weknow,tomarryHelena,"theyoungperson,mydear,"MissTwinkletonwouldsay,"whoformonthslivedalone,atinns,wearingabluesurtout,abuffwaistcoat,andgrey-"HerehorrorchokestheutteranceofMissTwinkleton。"ThenshewasinthevaultinANOTHERdisguise,notmorewomanly,atthatawfulscenewhenpoorMr。Jasperwasdrivenmad,sothatheconfessedallsortsofnonsense,for,mydear,alltheClosebelievesthatitWASnonsense,andthatMr。Jasperwasreducedtoinsanitybypersecution。AndMr。
Crisparkle,withthatelegantdaintymotherofhis-ithasbrokenherheart-ismarryingthishalf-castegipsyTROLLOP,withherbluesurtoutandgrey-oh,itisadisgracetoCloisterham!"
Theclimax,infact,asdevisedbyMr。CumingWalters,israthertoodramaticforthecomfortofaminorcanon。AhumoristlikeDickensoughttohaveseentheabsurdityofthesituation。Mr。WaltersMAYberight,HelenamaybeDatchery,butsheoughtnottobe。
WHOWASTHEPRINCESSPUFFER?
Whowastheopiumhag,thePrincessPuffer?Mr。CumingWalterswrites:"Wemakeaguess,forDickensgivesusnosolidfacts。ButwhenwerememberthatnotawordissaidthroughoutthevolumeofJasper’santecedents,whohewas,andwherehecamefrom;whenwerememberthatbutforhisnephewhewasalonelyman;whenweseethathewasbothcriminalandartist;whenweobservehisownwheedlingpropensity,hisfalseandfulsomeprotestationsofaffection,hisslyness,hissubtlety,hisheartlessness,histenacity;andwhen,aboveall,weknowthattheopiumviceisHEREDITARY,andthataYOUNG
manwouldnotbeaddictedtoitunlessbornwiththecraving;(5)
then,itisnottoowildaconjecturethatJasperwasthewaywardprogenyofthissameopium-eatingwoman,allofwhosecharacteristicshepossessed,and,perchance,ofamanofcriminalinstincts,butofasuperiorposition。Jasperisamorbidanddiseasedbeingwhilestillinthetwenties,amixtureofgeniusandvice。Hehatesandhelovesfiercely,asiftherewerewildgipsybloodinhisveins。Thoughseeminglyamodelofdecorumanddevotedtohisart,hecomplainsofhis"dailydrudginground"and"thecrampedmonotonyofhisexistence。"Hecommitshiscrimewiththeruthlessnessofabeast,hisownnaturebeingwhollyuntamed。Ifwededucethathisfatherwasanadventurerandavagabond,weshallnotbefarwrong。Ifwededucethathismotherwastheopium-eater,prematurelyaged,whohadtransmittedherviciouspropensitytoherchild,weshallalmostcertainlyberight。"
WHOWASJASPER?
WhowasJasper?Hewasthebrother-in-lawofthelateMr。Drood,arespectedengineer,andUniversityman。WedonotknowwhencecameMrs。Drood,Jasper’ssister,butisitlikelythathermother"drankheaven’s-hard"-sothehagsaysofherself-thentooktokeepinganopiumden,andthereentertainedhersonJasper,alreadyanaccomplishedvocalist,butinalowerstationthanthattowhichhismusicalgeniuslaterraisedhim,aslayPrecentor?IfthePrincessPufferbe,asonMr。CumingWalters’stheorysheis,Edwin’slong-lostgrandmother,herdiscoverywouldbeunwelcometoEdwin。Probablyshedidnotlivemuchlonger;"mylungsarelikecabbagenets,"shesays。
Mr。CumingWaltersgoeson-
"Herpurposeisleftobscure。Howeasily,however,weseepossibilitiesinadirectionsuchasthis。Thefather,perhapsaproud,handsomeman,desertsthewoman,andremovesthechild。Thewomanhatesbothforscorningher,butthefatherdies,ordisappears,andisbeyondhervengeance。Thenthechild,victimtotheillsinhisblood,creepsbacktotheopiumden,notknowinghismother,butimmediatelyrecognizedbyher。Shewillmakethechildsufferforthesinsofthefather,whohaddestroyedherhappiness。SuchathemewasonewhichappealedtoDickens。Itmustnot,however,beurged;andthecrucialquestionafterallisconcernedwiththeopiumwomanasoneoftheunconsciousinstrumentsofjustice,aidingwithhertrifleofcircumstantialevidencetheNemesisawaitingJasper。
"Anotherhypothesis-followingontheCarkerthemein’DombeyandSon’-isthatJasper,adissoluteanddegenerateman,lascivious,andheartless,mayhavewrongedachildofthewoman’s;butitisnotlikelythatDickenswouldrepeattheMrs。Brownstory。"
Jasper,PERE,fatherofJohnJasperandofMrs。Drood,howeverhandsome,oughtnottohavedesertedMrs。Jasper。WhetherJohnJasper,prematurelydevotedtoopium,becameEdwin’sguardianatabouttheageoffifteen,orwhether,onattaininghismajority,hesucceededtosomeotherguardian,isnotveryobvious。Inshort,wecannotguesswhythePrincessPufferhatedJasper,apayingclientoflongstanding。WeareonlycertainthatJasperwasabadfellow,andthatthePrincessPuffersaid,"Iknowhim,betterthanalltheReverendParsonsputtogetherknowhim。"Ontheotherhand,Edwin"seemstoknow"theopiumwoman,whenhemeetsheronChristmasEve,whichmaybeapointinfavourofherbeinghislong-lostgrandmother。
Jasperwascertainlytriedandcondemned;forDickensintended"totakeMr。FildestoacondemnedcellinMaidstone,orsomeothergaol,inordertomakeadrawing。"(6)PossiblyJaspermanagedtotakehisownlife,inthecell;possiblyhewasdulyhanged。
Jasper,afterall,wasafailureasamurderer,evenifwesupposehimtohavestrangledhisnephewsuccessfully。"Itisobvioustothemostexcruciatinglyfeeblecapacity"that,ifhemeanttogetridofproofsoftheidentityofDrood’sbodybymeansofquicklime,itdidnotsufficetoremoveDrood’spin,watch,andchain。Droodwouldhavecoinsoftherealminhispockets,gold,silver,bronze。Quicklimewouldnotdestroythesemetallicobjects,norwoulditdestroykeys,whichwouldeasilyproveDrood’sidentity。IfJasperknewhisbusiness,hewould,ofcourse,rifleALLofEdwin’spocketsminutely,andwouldremovethemetallicbuttonsofhisbraces,whichgenerallydisplaythemaker’sname,orthetailor’s。OnresearchIfind"H。
Poole&Co。,SavileRow"onmybuttons。Inthisinquiryofhis,JasperwouldhavediscoveredtheringinEdwin’sbreastpocket,andwouldhavetakenitaway。PerhapsDickensneverthoughtofthatlittlefact:ifhedidthinkofit,nodoubthefoundsomemodeofaccountingforJasper’sunworkmanlikenegligence。Thetrouser-buttonswouldhaveledanyinquirerstraighttoEdwin’stailor;IinclinetosuspectthatneitherDickensnorJaspernoticedthatcircumstance。
Theconscientiousartistincrimecannotaffordtoneglectthehumblestandmostobviousdetails。
CONCLUSION
ACCORDINGtomytheory,whichmainlyrestsontheunmistakableevidenceofthecoverdrawnbyCollinsunderDickens’sdirections,all"endswell。"Jaspercomestothegriefhedeserves:Helena,afterherperiodofmourningforNeville,marriesCrisparkle:Rosawedshermariner。Edwin,attwenty-one,isnotheart-broken,but,agreatlyimprovedcharacter,takes,toquotehisownwords,"asensibleinterestinworksofengineeringskill,especiallywhentheyaretochangethewholeconditionofanundevelopedcountry"-Egypt。
TheseconclusionsareinevitableunlessweeithersupposeDickenstohavearrangedadisappointmentforhisreadersintheTABLEAUofJasperandDrood,inthevault,onthecover,orcanpersuadeourselvesthatnotDrood,butsomeotheryoungman,isrevealedbythelightofJasper’slantern。Now,theyoungmanisverylikeDrood,andveryunlikethedarkfierceHelenaLandless:disguisedasDrood,thistime,notasDatchery。AllthedifficultyastowhyDrood,ifheescapedalive,didnotatonceopenlydenounceJasper,isremovedwhenweremember,asMr。ArcherandIhaveindependentlypointedout,thatDrood,whenattackedbyJasper,was(likeDurdlesinthe"unaccountableexpedition")stupefiedbydrugs,andsohadnovalidevidenceagainsthisuncle。Whetherscienceisacquaintedwiththedrugsnecessaryforsuchpurposesisanotherquestion。Theyarealwayskeptinstockbystarvingandvenalapothecariesinfictionandthedrama,andarearecognizedconventionofromance。
SoendsourunfoldingoftheMysteryofEdwinDrood。
Footnotes:
(1)Landlessisnot"Lackland,"butaformofdeLaundeles,aLothiannameofthetwelfthcentury,mergedlaterinthatofOrmistoun。
(2)LIFEOFDICKENS,vol。iii。pp。425-439。
(3)J。CumingWalters,p。102;Proctor,pp。131-135。Mr。CumingWaltersusedaneditionof1896,apparentlyareprintofapaperbyProctor,writtenearlierthanhisfinalbookof1887。HencetheerrorastoMr。Proctor’slasttheory。
(4)Mrs。Perugini,thebookssay,butcertainlyadaughter。
(5)WhatwouldWeissmannsaytoallthis?
(6)SoMr。CumingWaltersquotesMr。Hughes,whoquotesSirL。Fildes。
HEbelievesthatJasperstrangledEdwinwiththeblack-silkscarf,and,nodoubt,Jasperwasforlongofthatopinionhimself。