Charonbeatingthelaggingshadeswithhisoar;AntaiospickingupthepoetswithhisfingersandloweringtheminthehollowofhishandintotheNinthCircle;Satancrunchinginhismonstrousjawsthearch-traitors,Judas,BrutusandCassius;UgolinoappeasinghisfamineuponthetoughnapeofRuggieri;BertranddeBornlookingifImaybeallowedtheexpressionathisowndisseveredhead;therobbersexchangingformwithserpents;thewholedemoniactroopofMalebolge,——arenotallthesethingsgrotesquebeyondeverythingelseinpoetry?Tous,nurturedinthisscientificnineteenthcentury,theydoubtlessseemso;andbyLeighHunt,whohadtheeighteenth-centurywayofappreciatingotheragesthanhisown,theywereuniformlytreatedassuch。Toustheyareatfirstsightgrotesque,becausetheyarenolongerrealtous。Wehaveceasedtobelieveinsuchthings,andtheynolongerawakenanyfeelingakintoterror。Butinthethirteenthcentury,inthemindsofDanteandhisreaders,theywereliving,terriblerealities。ThatDantebelievedliterallyinallthisunearthlyworld,anddescribeditwithsuchwonderfulminutenessbecausehebelievedinit,admitsoflittledoubt。AshewalkedthestreetsofVeronathepeoplewhispered,“See,thereisthemanwhohasbeeninhell!“Truly,hehadbeeninhell,anddescribeditashehadseenit,withthekeeneyesofimaginationandfaith。Withallitsweirdunearthliness,thereishardlyanotherbookinthewholerangeofhumanliteraturewhichismarkedwithsuchunswervingveracityasthe“DivineComedy。“
Nothingistheresetdownarbitrarily,outofwantoncapriceorforthesakeofpoeticeffect,butbecausetoDante’simaginationithadsoimposinglyshownitselfthathecouldnotbutdescribeitashesawit。Inreadinghiscantosweforgetthepoet,andhavebeforeusonlytheveracioustravellerinstrangerealms,fromwhomtheshrewdestcross-examinationcanelicitbutoneconsistentaccount。Tohismind,andtothemediaevalmindgenerally,thisouterkingdom,withitswardsofDespair,Expiation,andBeatitude,wasasrealastheHolyRomanEmpireitself。Itsextraordinaryphenomenawerenottobelookedonwithcriticaleyesandcalledgrotesque,butweretobeseenwitheyesoffaith,andtobeworshipped,loved,orshudderedat。Rightlyviewed,therefore,thepoemofDanteisnotgrotesque,butunspeakablyawfulandsolemn;andthestatementisjustifiedthatallgrotesquenessandbizarrerieinitsinterpretationistobesedulouslyavoided。
Therefore,whileacknowledgingtheaccuracywithwhichMr。
Longfellowhaskeptpacewithhisoriginalthroughlineafterline,followingthe“footingofitsfeet,“accordingtothemottoquotedonhistitle-page,IcannotbutthinkthathisaccuracywouldhavebeenofasomewhathigherkindifhehadnowandthenallowedhimselfalittlemorelibertyofchoicebetweenEnglishandRomanicwordsandidioms。
Afewexampleswillperhapsservetostrengthenaswellastoelucidatestillfurtherthisposition。
“Inferno,“CantoIII。,line22,accordingtoLongfellow:——
“Theresighs,complaints,andululationsloudResoundedthroughtheairwithoutastar,WhenceIatthebeginningweptthereat。“
AccordingtoCary:
“Heresighs,withlamentationsandloudmoansResoundedthroughtheairpiercedbynostar,Thate’enIweptatentering。“
AccordingtoParsons-
“Midsighs,laments,andhollowhowlsofwoe,Which,loudresoundingthroughthestarlessair,Forcedtearsofpityfrommineeyesatfirst。“[42]
“Quivisospiri,piantiedaltiguaiRisonavanperl’nersenzastelle,Perch’ioalcominciarnelagrimai。“
CantoV。,line
LONGFELLOW。“Flythroughtheairbytheirvolitionborne。“
CARY。“Cleavetheair,waftedbytheirwillalong。“
PARSONS“Spedeveronwardbytheirwishalone。“
“Volanperl’aerdalvolerportate。“
LONGFELLOW。“Thatheconcedetoushisstalwartshoulders。“
CARY“ThattoushemayvouchsafeTheaidofhisstrongshoulders。“
PARSONS。“Andaskforushisshoulders’strongsupport。“[44]
“Cheneconcedaisuoiomeriforti。“
“Histailwaswhollyquiveringinthevoid,ContortingupwardstheenvenomedforkThatintheguiseofscorpionarmeditspoint。“
CARY——
“InthevoidGlancing,histailupturneditsvenomousfork,Withstinglikescorpionsarmed。“
PARSONS——“Inthevoidchasmhistremblingtailheshowed,Asuptheenvenomed,forkedpointheswung,Which,asinscorpions,armeditstaperingend。“[45]
“Nelvanotuttasuecodaguizzava,Torcendoinsulavenenosaforca,Che,aguisadiscorpion,lapuntaarmava。“
CantoV。,line51:——
LONGFELLOW——“Peoplewhomtheblackairsocastigates。
CARY——“Bytheblackairsoscourged。“
“Gentichel’auranerasigastiga。“
LONGFELLOW——“Kissedmeuponthemouthallpalpitating。“
CARY——“Mylipsalltremblingkissed
“Laboccamibaciotuttotremante。“
“Purgatorio,“CantoXV。,line139:——
“Wepassedalong,athwartthetwilightpeeringForwardasfarasevereyecouldstretchAgainstthesunbeamsserotineandlucent。“[48]
“NoiandavamperlovesperoattentiOltre,quantopoteangliocchiallungarsi,Contrairaggiserotinielucenti。“
Mr。Cary’s“brightvespertineray“isonlyatriflebetter;butMr。Wright’s“splendouroftheeveningray“is,initssimplicity,farpreferable。
LONGFELLOW。“DidtheotherthreeadvanceSingingtotheirangelicsaraband。“
CARY。“TotheirowncarolontheycameDancing,infestiveringangelical“
WRIGHT-“Andsongsaccompaniedtheirangeldance。“
HereMr。LongfellowhasapparentlyfollowedtheauthorityoftheCrusca,reading“Cantandoalloroangelicocarribo,“
andtranslatingcarribobysaraband,akindofMoorishdance。Thebestmanuscripts,however,sanctionM。Witte’sreading:——
“Danzandoalloroangelicocarribo。“
Ifthisbecorrect,carribocannotsignify“adance,“butrather“thesongwhichaccompaniesthedance“;andthetruesenseofthepassagewillhavebeenbestrenderedbyMr。Cary。[49]
SeeBlanc,VocabolarioDantesco,s。v。“caribo。“
WheneverMr。Longfellow’stranslationiskeptfreefromodditiesofdictionandconstruction,itisveryanimatedandvigorous。
Nothingcanbefinerthanhisrenderingof“Purgatorio,“CantoVI。,lines
“OGermanAlbert!whoabandonestHerthathasgrownrecalcitrantandsavage,Andoughtesttobestridehersaddle-bow,MayajustjudgmentfromthestarsdownfallUponthyblood,andbeitnewandopen,Thatthysuccessormayhavefearthereof:
Becausethyfatherandthyselfhavesuffered,Bygreedofthosetransalpinelandsdistrained,Thegardenoftheempiretobewaste。
ComeandbeholdMontecchiandCappelletti,MonaldiandFilippeschi,carelessman!
Thosesadalready,andthesedoubt-depressed!
Come,cruelone!comeandbeholdtheoppressionOfthynobility,andcuretheirwounds,Andthoushaltseehowsafe[?]isSantafiore。
ComeandbeholdthyRomethatislamenting,Widowed,alone,anddayandnightexclaims’MyCaesar,whyhastthouforsakenme?’
Comeandbeholdhowlovingarethepeople;
Andifforusnopitymoveththee,Comeandbemadeashamedofthyrenown。“[50]
[50]“OAlbertoTedesco,cheabbandoniCosteich’efattaindomitaeselvaggia,Edovrestiinforcarlisuoiarcioni,GiustogindiziodallestellecaggiaSoprailtuosangue,esianuovoedaperto,Talcheiltuosuccessortemenzan’aggia:
Cheavetetueiltuopadresofferto,Percupidigiadicostadistretti,Cheilgiardindell’imperiosiadiserto。
VieniavederMontecchieCappelletti,MonaldieFilippeschi,uomsenzacura:
Colorgiatristi,equesticonsospetti。
Vien,crudel,vieni,evedilapressuraDe’tuoigentili,ecurelormagagne,EvedraiSantafiorcom’eoscura[secura?]。
VieniavederlatuaRomachepiagne,Vedovaesola,edienottechiama:
Cesaremio,perchenonm’accompagne?
Vieniavederlagentequantos’ama;
Esenulladinoipietatimove,Avergognartiviendellatuafama。“
So,too,CantoIII。,lines
“AssheepcomeissuingforthfromoutthefoldByones,andtwos,andthrees,andtheothersstandTimidlyholdingdowntheireyesandnostrils,AndwhattheforemostdoestheothersdoHuddlingthemselvesagainstherifshestop,Simpleandquiet,andthewhereforeknownot。“[51]
“ComelepecorelleescondelchiusoAduna,adue,atre,el’altrestannoTimidetteatterrandol’occhioeilmuso;