首页 >出版文学> Fenimore Cooper’s Literary Offences>第1章
  ThePathfinderandTheDeerslayerstandattheheadofCooper’snovelsasartisticcreations。Thereareothersofhisworkswhichcontainpartsasperfectasaretobefoundinthese,andscenesevenmorethrilling。Notonecanbecomparedwitheitherofthemasafinishedwhole。
  Thedefectsinbothofthesetalesarecomparativelyslight。
  Theywerepureworksofart。——Prof。Lounsbury。
  Thefivetalesrevealanextraordinaryfulnessofinvention……Oneoftheverygreatestcharactersinfiction,NattyBumppo
  Thecraftofthewoodsman,thetricksofthetrapper,allthedelicateartoftheforest,werefamiliartoCooperfromhisyouthup。——Prof。BranderMatthews。
  CooperisthegreatestartistinthedomainofromanticfictionyetproducedbyAmerica。——WilkieCollins。
  ItseemstomethatitwasfarfromrightfortheProfessorofEnglishLiteratureinYale,theProfessorofEnglishLiteratureinColumbia,andWilkieColliestodeliveropinionsonCooper’sliteraturewithouthavingreadsomeofit。ItwouldhavebeenmuchmoredecoroustokeepsilentandletpersonstalkwhohavereadCooper。
  Cooper’sarthassomedefects。Inoneplacein’Deerslayer,’andintherestrictedspaceoftwo—thirdsofapage,Cooperhasscored114offencesagainstliteraryartoutofapossible115。Itbreakstherecord。
  Therearenineteenrulesgoverningliteraryartinthedomainofromanticfiction——somesaytwenty—two。InDeerslayerCooperviolatedeighteenofthem。Theseeighteenrequire:
  1。Thatataleshallaccomplishsomethingandarrivesomewhere。ButtheDeerslayertaleaccomplishesnothingandarrivesintheair。
  2。Theyrequirethattheepisodesofataleshallbenecessarypartsofthetale,andshallhelptodevelopit。ButastheDeerslayertaleisnotatale,andaccomplishesnothingandarrivesnowhere,theepisodeshavenorightfulplaceinthework,sincetherewasnothingforthemtodevelop。
  3。Theyrequirethatthepersonagesinataleshallbealive,exceptinthecaseofcorpses,andthatalwaysthereadershallbeabletotellthecorpsesfromtheothers。ButthisdetailhasoftenbeenoverlookedintheDeerslayertale。
  4。Theyrequirethatthepersonagesinatale,bothdeadandalive,shallexhibitasufficientexcuseforbeingthere。ButthisdetailalsohasbeenoverlookedintheDeerslayertale。
  5。Theyrequirethatwhenthepersonagesofataledealinconversation,thetalkshallsoundlikehumantalk,andbetalksuchashumanbeingswouldbelikelytotalkinthegivencircumstances,andhaveadiscoverablemeaning,alsoadiscoverablepurpose,andashowofrelevancy,andremainintheneighborhoodofthesubjectinhand,andbeinterestingtothereader,andhelpoutthetale,andstopwhenthepeoplecannotthinkofanythingmoretosay。ButthisrequirementhasbeenignoredfromthebeginningoftheDeerslayertaletotheendofit。
  6。Theyrequirethatwhentheauthordescribesthecharacterofapersonageinhistale,theconductandconversationofthatpersonageshalljustifysaiddescription。ButthislawgetslittleornoattentionintheDeerslayertale,asNattyBumppo’scasewillamplyprove。
  7。Theyrequirethatwhenapersonagetalkslikeanillustrated,gilt—
  edged,tree—calf,hand—tooled,seven—dollarFriendship’sOfferinginthebeginningofaparagraph,heshallnottalklikeanegrominstrelintheendofit。ButthisruleisflungdownanddanceduponintheDeerslayertale。
  8。Theyrequirethatcrassstupiditiesshallnotbeplayeduponthereaderas"thecraftofthewoodsman,thedelicateartoftheforest,"byeithertheauthororthepeopleinthetale。ButthisruleispersistentlyviolatedintheDeerslayertale。
  9。Theyrequirethatthepersonagesofataleshallconfinethemselvestopossibilitiesandletmiraclesalone;or,iftheyventureamiracle,theauthormustsoplausiblysetitforthastomakeitlookpossibleandreasonable。ButtheserulesarenotrespectedintheDeerslayertale。
  10。Theyrequirethattheauthorshallmakethereaderfeeladeepinterestinthepersonagesofhistaleandintheirfate;andthatheshallmakethereaderlovethegoodpeopleinthetaleandhatethebadones。ButthereaderoftheDeerslayertaledislikesthegoodpeopleinit,isindifferenttotheothers,andwishestheywouldallgetdrownedtogether。
  11。Theyrequirethatthecharactersinataleshallbesoclearlydefinedthatthereadercantellbeforehandwhateachwilldoinagivenemergency。ButintheDeerslayertalethisruleisvacated。
  Inadditiontotheselargerulestherearesomelittleones。Theserequirethattheauthorshall:
  12。Saywhatheisproposingtosay,notmerelycomenearit。
  13。Usetherightword,notitssecondcousin。
  14。Eschewsurplusage。
  15。Notomitnecessarydetails。
  16。Avoidslovenlinessofform。
  17。Usegoodgrammar。
  18。Employasimpleandstraightforwardstyle。
  EventhesesevenarecoldlyandpersistentlyviolatedintheDeerslayertale。
  Cooper’sgiftinthewayofinventionwasnotarichendowment;butsuchasitwashelikedtoworkit,hewaspleasedwiththeeffects,andindeedhedidsomequitesweetthingswithit。Inhislittleboxofstagepropertieshekeptsixoreightcunningdevices,tricks,artificesforhissavagesandwoodsmentodeceiveandcircumventeachotherwith,andhewasneversohappyaswhenhewasworkingtheseinnocentthingsandseeingthemgo。Afavoriteonewastomakeamoccasinedpersontreadinthetracksofthemoccasinedenemy,andthushidehisowntrail。
  Cooperworeoutbarrelsandbarrelsofmoccasinsinworkingthattrick。
  Anotherstage—propertythathepulledoutofhisboxprettyfrequentlywashisbrokentwig。Heprizedhisbrokentwigabovealltherestofhiseffects,andworkeditthehardest。Itisarestfulchapterinanybookofhiswhensomebodydoesn’tsteponadrytwigandalarmalltheredsandwhitesfortwohundredyardsaround。EverytimeaCooperpersonisinperil,andabsolutesilenceisworthfourdollarsaminute,heissuretosteponadrytwig。Theremaybeahundredhandierthingstostepon,butthatwouldn’tsatisfyCooper。Cooperrequireshimtoturnoutandfindadrytwig;andifhecan’tdoit,goandborrowone。Infact,theLeatherStockingSeriesoughttohavebeencalledtheBrokenTwigSeries。
  Iamsorrythereisnotroomtoputinafewdozeninstancesofthedelicateartoftheforest,aspractisedbyNattyBumppoandsomeoftheotherCooperianexperts。Perhapswemayventuretwoorthreesamples。
  Cooperwasasailor——anavalofficer;yethegravelytellsushowavessel,drivingtowardsaleeshoreinagale,issteeredforaparticularspotbyherskipperbecauseheknowsofanundertowtherewhichwillholdherbackagainstthegaleandsaveher。Forjustpurewoodcraft,orsailorcraft,orwhateveritis,isn’tthatneat?ForseveralyearsCooperwasdailyinthesocietyofartillery,andheoughttohavenoticedthatwhenacannon—ballstrikesthegrounditeitherburiesitselforskipsahundredfeetorso;skipsagainahundredfeetorso——andsoon,tillfinallyitgetstiredandrolls。Nowinoneplacehelosessome"females"——ashealwayscallswomen——intheedgeofawoodnearaplainatnightinafog,onpurposetogiveBumppoachancetoshowoffthedelicateartoftheforestbeforethereader。Thesemislaidpeoplearehuntingforafort。Theyhearacannonblast,andacannon—
  ballpresentlycomesrollingintothewoodandstopsattheirfeet。Tothefemalesthissuggestsnothing。ThecaseisverydifferentwiththeadmirableBumppo。IwishImayneverknowpeaceagainifhedoesn’tstrikeoutpromptlyandfollowthetrackofthatcannon—ballacrosstheplainthroughthedensefogandfindthefort。Isn’titadaisy?IfCooperhadanyrealknowledgeofNature’swaysofdoingthings,hehadamostdelicateartinconcealingthefact。Forinstance:oneofhisacuteIndianexperts,Chingachgook(pronouncedChicago,Ithink),haslostthetrailofapersonheistrackingthroughtheforest。Apparentlythattrailishopelesslylost。NeitheryounorIcouldeverhaveguessedoutthewaytofindit。ItwasverydifferentwithChicago。Chicagowasnotstumpedforlong。Heturnedarunningstreamoutofitscourse,andthere,intheslushinitsoldbed,werethatperson’smoccasin—tracks。
  Thecurrentdidnotwashthemaway,asitwouldhavedoneinallotherlikecases——no,eventheeternallawsofNaturehavetovacatewhenCooperwantstoputupadelicatejobofwoodcraftonthereader。
  WemustbealittlewarywhenBranderMatthewstellsusthatCooper’sbooks"revealanextraordinaryfulnessofinvention。"Asarule,IamquitewillingtoacceptBranderMatthews’sliteraryjudgmentsandapplaudhislucidandgracefulphrasingofthem;butthatparticularstatementneedstobetakenwithafewtonsofsalt。Blessyourheart,Cooperhadn’tanymoreinventionthanahorse;andIdon’tmeanahigh—classhorse,either;Imeanaclothes—horse。Itwouldbeverydifficulttofindareallyclever"situation"inCooper’sbooks,andstillmoredifficulttofindoneofanykindwhichhehasfailedtorenderabsurdbyhishandlingofit。Lookattheepisodesof"thecaves";andatthecelebratedscufflebetweenMaquaandthoseothersonthetable—landafewdayslater;andatHurryHarry’squeerwater—transitfromthecastletotheark;andatDeerslayer’shalf—hourwithhisfirstcorpse;andatthequarrelbetweenHurryHarryandDeerslayerlater;andat——butchooseforyourself;youcan’tgoamiss。
  IfCooperhadbeenanobserverhisinventivefacultywouldhaveworkedbetter;notmoreinterestingly,butmorerationally,moreplausibly。
  Cooper’sproudestcreationsinthewayof"situations"suffernoticeablyfromtheabsenceoftheobserver’sprotectinggift。Cooper’seyewassplendidlyinaccurate。Cooperseldomsawanythingcorrectly。Hesawnearlyallthingsasthroughaglasseye,darkly。Ofcourseamanwhocannotseethecommonestlittleevery—daymattersaccuratelyisworkingatadisadvantagewhenheisconstructinga"situation。"IntheDeerslayertaleCooperhasastreamwhichisfiftyfeetwidewhereitflowsoutofalake;itpresentlynarrowstotwentyasitmeandersalongfornogivenreason;andyetwhenastreamactslikethatitoughttoberequiredtoexplainitself。Fourteenpageslaterthewidthofthebrook’soutletfromthelakehassuddenlyshrunkthirtyfeet,andbecome"thenarrowestpartofthestream。"Thisshrinkageisnotaccountedfor。
  Thestreamhasbendsinit,asureindicationthatithasalluvialbanksandcutsthem;yetthesebendsareonlythirtyandfiftyfeetlong。IfCooperhadbeenaniceandpunctiliousobserverhewouldhavenoticedthatthebendswereoftenerninehundredfeetlongthanshortofit。
  Coopermadetheexitofthatstreamfiftyfeetwide,inthefirstplace,fornoparticularreason;inthesecondplace,henarrowedittolessthantwentytoaccommodatesomeIndians。Hebendsa"sapling"totheformofanarchoverthisnarrowpassage,andconcealssixIndiansinitsfoliage。Theyare"laying"forasettler’sscoworarkwhichiscomingupthestreamonitswaytothelake;itisbeinghauledagainstthestiffcurrentbyaropewhosestationaryendisanchoredinthelake;itsrateofprogresscannotbemorethanamileanhour。Cooperdescribestheark,butprettyobscurely。Inthematterofdimensions"itwaslittlemorethanamoderncanal—boat。"Letusguess,then,thatitwasaboutonehundredandfortyfeetlong。Itwasof"greaterbreadththancommon。"Letusguess,then,thatitwasaboutsixteenfeetwide。Thisleviathanhadbeenprowlingdownbendswhichwerebutathirdaslongasitself,andscrapingbetweenbankswhereithadonlytwofeetofspacetospareoneachside。Wecannottoomuchadmirethismiracle。Alow—
  roofedlogdwellingoccupies"two—thirdsoftheark’slength"——adwellingninetyfeetlongandsixteenfeetwide,letussayakindofvestibuletrain。Thedwellinghastworooms——eachforty—fivefeetlongandsixteenfeetwide,letusguess。OneofthemisthebedroomoftheHuttergirls,JudithandHetty;theotheristheparlorinthedaytime,atnightitispapa’sbedchamber。Thearkisarrivingatthestream’sexitnow,whosewidthhasbeenreducedtolessthantwentyfeettoaccommodatetheIndians——saytoeighteen。Thereisafoottospareoneachsideoftheboat。DidtheIndiansnoticethattherewasgoingtobeatightsqueezethere?Didtheynoticethattheycouldmakemoneybyclimbingdownoutofthatarchedsaplingandjuststeppingaboardwhenthearkscrapedby?
  No,otherIndianswouldhavenoticedthesethings,butCooper’sIndiansnevernoticeanything。Cooperthinkstheyaremarvelouscreaturesfornoticing,buthewasalmostalwaysinerrorabouthisIndians。Therewasseldomasaneoneamongthem。
  Thearkisonehundredandfortyfeetlong;thedwellingisninetyfeetlong。TheideaoftheIndiansistodropsoftlyandsecretlyfromthearchedsaplingtothedwellingasthearkcreepsalongunderitattherateofamileanhour,andbutcherthefamily。Itwilltakethearkaminuteandahalftopassunder。Itwilltaketheninetyfootdwellingaminutetopassunder。Now,then,whatdidthesixIndiansdo?Itwouldtakeyouthirtyyearstoguess,andeventhenyouwouldhavetogiveitup,Ibelieve。Therefore,IwilltellyouwhattheIndiansdid。Theirchief,apersonofquiteextraordinaryintellectforaCooperIndian,warilywatchedthecanal—boatasitsqueezedalongunderhim,andwhenhehadgothiscalculationsfineddowntoexactlytherightshade,ashejudged,heletgoanddropped。Andmissedthehouse!Thatisactuallywhathedid。Hemissedthehouse,andlandedinthesternofthescow。
  Itwasnotmuchofafall,yetitknockedhimsilly。Helaythereunconscious。Ifthehousehadbeenninety—sevenfeetlonghewouldhavemadethetrip。ThefaultwasCooper’s,nothis。Theerrorlayintheconstructionofthehouse。Cooperwasnoarchitect。
  TherestillremainedintheroostfiveIndians。
  Theboathaspassedunderandisnowoutoftheirreach。Letmeexplainwhatthefivedid——youwouldnotbeabletoreasonitoutforyourself。
  No。1jumpedfortheboat,butfellinthewaterasternofit。ThenNo。
  2jumpedfortheboat,butfellinthewaterstillfartherasternofit。